99 word poem.

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By pez on Thursday, August 23, 2001 - 04:00 pm:

    this is a poem i wrote last year for my creative writing class. it was one of the last "serious" poems i wrote.

    * * *

    three at war, throwing talk talk bombs at oneanother. caught in the middle, ears abcessed. all is night.

    run. be a refugee in slippers and short sleeves. cry for a lost home, lost hopes. cry for future: happenings now, next year? cry.

    no place to go, attacked by semis, near-assaulted by cars: all blind to lone refugee. peacekeeper returns homeless to war. all calling for vanished.

    try to fly. wings clipped.

By Alex on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 01:11 pm:

    great poem there Pez, very emotional.

    Moving

    What inspired you to write it?

By Hal on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 01:39 pm:

    very well written.

By Nate on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 02:20 pm:

    HAL + PEZ = 5,000,000,000,000,000 BABIES!!!!!!

By Dougie on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 02:37 pm:

    Yeah, I wonder what they'll do on their first date. I mean, the ice has broken here and via phonecalls. Meeting face to face shouldn't be traumatic cause I'm assuming they've exchanged pictures. So what's left? Throwing bologna slices at each other's bare asses. Then they'd better get a start on making them five quadrillion babies.

By patrick on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 02:46 pm:

    nate + heather= 20,000,000,000,000,000 babies!!!

By semillama on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 02:54 pm:

    me+mad science=330,089 clones.

By pez on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 03:05 pm:

    hrmph.

    repsonse numero un:

    than-q.
    real-life experience, at age 16.

    response numero deux:

    fuck off nate.

    the day i have even one kid is the day i start being responsible, and who'd want that?

By Nate on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 03:05 pm:

    damn right patrick. and i'm going to ride in the parade chariot with my children marching about me. bjork's "army of me" blasting from the loudspeakers. picture that, mien hundt.

By pez on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 03:14 pm:

    that's a goood damn song.


    i used it to turn a sXe christan metalhead on to bjork.




    heheeheeee!!!!

By Spider on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 03:18 pm:

    Bjork has named her new album "Vespertine"! That's my favorite word. I learned it from Cyst.

By pez on Friday, August 24, 2001 - 03:22 pm:

    i have "post" and "telegram".

    "telegram" is perfect hyper music. i listen to it more than i do "post".

    i know a guy who once got hugged by bjork. he told me the last day of finals.

By Mooses brother on Thursday, November 8, 2001 - 01:36 pm:

    Bjorks ass smells of mooses cock.

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