My poem


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By Wavy on Friday, August 25, 2000 - 01:57 pm:

    Have you seen the angels dance?
    drifting on the darkest air
    silent creatures of the night
    graceful twisting turning where
    currents take their wingless flight

    Have you seen the angels dance?
    greying tendrils go beyond
    human has his focused sight

    Have you seen the angels dance?
    peaceful drifting on the wind
    trailing from an ember's
    gently glowing light
    whispered breath will bend
    graceful angel into flight


By J on Friday, August 25, 2000 - 02:24 pm:

    That is beautiful.


By Rhiannon on Friday, August 25, 2000 - 03:56 pm:

    "whispered breath will bend / graceful angel into flight"

    I like that line a lot.

    I also like how you repeat the "h" and "w" sounds so often: they make the poem sound soft to the ears.